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Chapter 2:  Tame Webcomic - CH2 Page 1 by Tailzkip

The relationship between humans and demons is strictly business, made up on beneficial contracts, rules and mutual understanding. But what will happen should a demon turn tame and refuse to follow the natural order?.

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The beginning interested me because i thought this would be a multitude of chapters where two characters who hated each other would gradually learn to like each other later and then some rules would be broken after stressing the severity of breaking those rules by using examples to show how meaningful their relation is, but now it seems you skipped that process and they already gone through it all that which makes me ask "What drew them closer together if they haven't accomplished anything? it takes more than living with them to like someone regardless of hating them(for example in college you live years with people and you can hate them for as long as it's possible)

so much for rules, you already skipped the bonding part to make the reveal that he's wasting time meaningful.

not only that but now the intro is weird because they were explaining something they should already know to each other given this happened years ago. I hope it goes somewhere unexpected because of that cause you had all the necessary things for a linear story before this page now we are missing a motive for the characters and are just watching them now. Time will tell i guess cause it doesn't look like your replying to comments.