Comic Book Tips - Mikazuki and Sakura

Just the finishes art from my tips Journals. If you have any tips you would like answered then ask and i'll see what I can do.
I call them tips because tutorial sounds like I'm telling you what to do XD.

My Tips For Fellow Comic WritersA couple of days ago :iconalice-whiterabbit: asked me a series of questions about comic making and writing. I started out making a response and felt that quite a few people might be able to learn from this. So I'm posting it in a journal for all to see. 
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  My advice to a first timer would be. Don't expect to get it right the first time. When it comes to learning anything new, you are likely to hit few bumps in the road to start off. However don't let this deter you. If your first pass isn't a great hit just keep revising and reworking your stories.  
  As far as comics go, ask yourself this...How many times have you read a professional printed manga or comic and not known what the heck is going on for most of it?...I've read a few like that. This   Tips for Comic Character Designwhilst we are on the subject of tutorial stuff. let's talk character design. to do so let's revisit our new partners in crime Mikazuki (wolf) and Sakura (deer)
  Step 1 original art style. So I'm going to focus on Mikazuki for a second, because I want to address, something that has always buged me about wolf OC's. THAT SAME GENERIC STYLE THEY TEND TO BE DRAWN IN!. How many wolf Oc's have I seen that all share a similar look and only have minor changes to the style?. To many!. This isn't necerally a bad thing, but it's not going to make your OC stand out from the rest if he looks the same as all the others. 
Now before you start getting mad or insulted, I get that it can be hard to make a wolf look unique because all you have to work with are markings. HOWEVER that's where your own unique style comes in.
They both look fine, but which would you label as my style? 

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